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Persistent scratches ripping
through the tranquility of the night,
and bedsheets dusty with flaked skin,
mingled with dried blood in the mornings.
Her skin stained with the purple sting of potassium permanganate,
burning from the relentless scorch of tea tree oil, smothered in topical
corticosteroids.
Bandaged to retain moisture. Unbandaged to promote air flow.
A blur of diagnoses and
“diagnoses” paraded by,
convictions by professionals and well-meaning relatives:
“No heat, no chlorine, no sunshine, no pollen. No butter, no wheat, no potato chips,
no fat, no chocolate, no seafood, no meat, no sugar, no salt!”
Too much American food. oxidized oils,
pesticides, hormones-those damn Oreos, all to blame.
“This doesn’t appear to be a food allergy, but we can run some tests…”
“You see, the American doctors don’t study this. This is a question of inner
body balance…”
A question of hotness and coldness of the body, toxicity, mystery, cortisone
creams.
And a vicious cycle of irritation, scratching,
broken
skin, infection, itchiness,
crying,
scolding, shouting, scratching…
And the mingling of voices of
authority spilled over the reddened cracks in her skin
and filled her heart with guilt and inadequacy.
“You are the only one who knows your body. Only you can know what to do for yourself-”
And the bitterness of her condition was accentuated
with the bitterness of soups and broths and
reductions,
darkly resplendent with Chinese medicinal herbs, kernels, stalks, and shoots.
Later, with
disappointment and failures came desperation
Cycling through past attempts, various diets.
The doctors’ echoes weren’t very much help-
the relief provided through the prescribed creams and ointments was ephemeral.
Though some knowledge provided comfort - like the dreaded skin prick testing -
her
back gridded into a 5x7 rectangle and stabbed thirty-five times
to reveal her body’s weaknesses
towards watermelon, shrimp, milk, Kentucky bluegrass,
timothy
hay, walnuts, chicken, turkey, sea bass, lobster, dust, mold, and cockroaches -
Her skin still burned and flared, cracked and red and dry and unforgiving,
betraying her.
I’ve watched the parade
of well-meaning people walking in and out of her life: smiling
pediatricians, puzzled dermatologists,
vehement relatives. No one is to blame.
I’ve watched her sneak
Oreos away from the pantry, stealing bites of childhood innocence;
shopping
for turtlenecks; being tormented by other children
for
the ragged appearance of her skin.
Watched my father drive three
hours to the only Costco that stocked unscented Keri Soothing Dry Skin Formula
and return home with thirty cases of three bottles each
(which
by the way, also didn’t work).
And I’ve watched her grow up and out of her skin,
which still bears the scars and rough patches of struggles and treatments,
up and out of reticence, sensitivity, resentment, confusion, worthlessness.
Rising above the motley patchwork of voices to wholeness.
Author Note: Clara Luu was born and raised in San Jose, CA. She is currently a
sophomore at Stanford University, studying Human Biology and living an
exciting pre-med life. "Quilted" is drawn from a composite of
household dermatological experiences from her childhood. This piece written
for the "Becoming a Doctor" medical humanities seminar taught by
Professor Larry Zaroff. It exemplifies the key motifs motivating
Clara to pursue a career in medicine: the mutifaceted aspects of
wellness, the importance of culturally sensitive medicine, the strong
role of family in the healing process, and the mysteries of some medical
conditions that are the catalyst for exploration, discovery, and
compassion.
